Do you know what it’s like to have
heaven and hell collide inside you?
The Knot that makes you want to cry,
scream and punch the walls down
and yet all you can do is sit there
and feel your throat tighten
and your eyes burn with your tears you’ll never shed.. π
So okay I’m not trying to be an asshole…HOWEVER you used the wrong there…you wrote their instead of there…I’m sorry for being that person but…it’s a really awesome poem and you’re not the only human that feels this way so I’d hate to see your great work have a silly mistake β€
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Oops.. it’s a blunder!! Thanks for the feedback and ya I’ve updated it.
Thanks for correcting it π
By the way, you are super awesome π
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awww thanks man
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I love the words and the sentiment. Beautiful:)
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love the photo!
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Great pic and powerful lines… π
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Yes… yes I do because I am “there” right now……. wanna hold my hand? π
It’s perfect the way it is……
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i didn’t even notice it had been fixed.
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Jami.. Thanks for putting up and ya everything gets better. It’s just about how long it takes.. π
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Yes! To many times. Beautiful pic and striking words.
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Nice post! love the sentiments portrayed in the words! Thanks for stopping by and liking my post :)- http://inspirelifelivelove.wordpress.com/2014/10/09/now-here/
Appreciate the support!
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Thanks Vani.. π
Your blog has some lovely posts..!
Thanks for putting up.
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Gorgeous writing … Thankyou
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Wonderfully said
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Thank you, Preksha! π
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Powerful lines that brought images to my mind. Nice piece
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Thank you! I am glad it reverberated in you. π
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hi did is globalnewsxtrem i have been noticing that you have been liking my posts and I would like you to follow my blog you might be knowing that I just started this blog and if you subscribe thanks
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Thank you!!
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