Everyone was smiling
and
even did He.
Seeing him smile, They asked,
‘How is She?’
He stood in silence
with the smile slowly fading away.
With a thought that He is reserved about Her,
they all chuckled and walked away.
And on another day,
a silence was misinterpreted. 😐
😦 Sometimes people can be mean. Try not to take it personally…
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A nice post … 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks, Vasantha 🙂
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Deep and relatable. Nicely written, really moving. Hope he finds solace.
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🙂 I hope too.
Thanks for pausing by, Askara 🙂
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Silence is beautiful untill it reaches the hurting point 🙂
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Poignant 💔💔💔
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Thank you so much for reading, Himali 🙂
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My pleasure A 🙂
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The unread silence leads to misinterpretation and that is what mostly happens. Beautiful lines and amazing rhymes. 🙂
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Rightly said, Archita!
Thank you. 😊
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Most welcome. 🙂
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A wonderful post!
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Thank you, Hasnae. 🙂
It’s good to have you here.
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I don’t know why but for some reason I need to tell you thank you, I love all the things you have written, they are beautiful and powerful I wish I could send this to you in a message but you are loved! ♡ please contact me, I’d love to talk to you more!
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🙂
Thank you so much for all these lovely words. I am happy that you liked it. 🙂
😀 Aww.. 🙂 You can checkout the ‘About me’ I have posted some connections their. 😉
And ya its good to have you here. 🙂
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I feel silence is a beautiful expression but can be equally dangerous. loved reading your poem 🙂
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Very rightly said, Aradhana.
Thanks, Thanks for reading!
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Words are golden. Silence is silver. Silence can mean all or nothing. Silence let the mind wonder. Silence can be a punishment for many and a blessing for others.
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That’s beautifully said!
Silence is a source of great strength too. 🙂
Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful thought! 🙂
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That was a very nice “photograph” of a moment in that poem. : ) Thanks for visiting!
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Thank you for stopping!
It was lovely to read the 16 words of your blog! Will be checking more of the fantastic posts you have. 😊 Happy Day. 😊
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It’s really nice.
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Thank you for reading, Srishti. 🙂
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a touching one i must say.. well written a 🙂
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Ah! thanks Pratyu(sha) 😊
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Beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you, Kritika!
Have a beautiful week ahead. 😊
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Thanks. You too 🙂
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Beautiful and deep
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I wish you always have people who can read your eyes and the reality behind your smile.
Thanks Njeri. 🙂
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Bon dimanche A ! Carole
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Bon weekend Carole. 🙂 🙂
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Merci, bon week end à toi, bisous, Carole
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Hi ! Thanks for liking my post. I liked this simple poetry of urs…Keep writing 🙂
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Hey! hi Priyanka,
It was wonderful reading your posts. I will be reading more of them soon. 😊
Thank you for staying up here! 😊
Cheers!
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Tu sais, parfois un silence en dit plus que des paroles ! Bises, Carole
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Très bien dit! Carole, à seulement quelques .. très rares personnes capables de lire les paroles derrière ce silence.
merci! 😊
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This was short but I felt it still had a deep meaning. More so cuz it is so relatable.
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Glad that it was relatable!
Hope you always have someone who can read your silence. 🙂
Have a good time.
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left me thinking for a long while!
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Hope you’re always heard by someone. 🙂
You appear to be very lovely, must be having some wonderful people around you. 🙂
Smiles.
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thanks so much I have 9 wonderful children!
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Wow.. 🙂 🙂
Those 9 wonderful children have one of the best mom on the planet earth. 🙂
Wish you always have a reason to smile about. 🙂
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Thanks A! you are ever so sweet!
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I really like how a lot people might be recalling something similar in their lives and are left with a silence after reading the last line 🙂
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I agree, hope you never come across this kind of scream, a silence. 🙂
Thanks for pausing, Aditi! 🙂
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Thankyou for stopping by my blog 😀
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This silence you wrote about cant be even expressed properly in words as this is extremely painful. Because I am feeling this right now and it really hurts. People dont care what you are going through yet they will continue to dig deep & hurt u till when you have your emotional breakdown. Guess life is a great teacher. Sometimes we have to bend to stand up!!! Btw loved the expression. 🙂
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Oh! It hurts, yes it really does. I can imagine and feel what you must be feeling like (sometimes its numb).
Sometimes people dig because they care and want to know what’s the root cause, yes it hurts and by getting this painful sensation you’re giving yourself a chance to get cured.
I agree that we have to bend at times, stop a bit, unload few feelings and again search the for the best.
Hope your current feeling will be vanished and replaced by some beautiful smiles and people to hold you strong. 😊
Take care, Maitreyi.
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Thank you so much!!! I hope what you wished for me comes out true. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Tiffany Belle Harper and commented:
beautiful x
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Thanks, Tiffany! 🙂
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my pleasure A
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why did he smile? why did the smile fade? hmmm, i think we will never know… so lonely in our own minds…
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Probably, the shine that I saw on that very day was after a long time to be seen. It faded because of some heavy thoughts pouring over his mind which brought pain in his heart.
You never know what more he was going through.
Thanks for reading, Elaine.
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there is only One Who can know the thoughts that make up each of our molecules and atoms… all we have is… blogs lol to make some tangent of ourselves known to another mind.
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Very nicely said.
Blogs are definitely a place for many who share what they don’t share often. Some thoughts which are hidden in cores. But I don’t think anyone does it to be known by another mind. It is done for own-self, but if its been felt by others who have been through the same roads then it is amazing.
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bah! doing it for one’s self is called ‘journaling’ in your books in private lol blogging neeeeeds an audience, and if we are willing to admit it, it’s done for that amaaaaazing response that we sometimes get from a shared ‘molecule’ with someone else 🙂
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Technology has given a platform where you can write it down in personal or in public. So, writing a journal in a book is tough nowadays.
I wonder how many people have shared their tearing thoughts just to be heard by others even knowing they won’t be pleased by any of them.
I don’t think everything is put for audience. If ordinary readers can come up and relate to you then its incredible. The shared molecule is in public but not for an attempt to get responses only. They maybe for your thoughts to float and remind you of being changed from what you were and what you are.
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well, i get what you are saying, i use facebook for that, thoughts i don’t want seen but want to express… i have two childhood friends on facebook and that’s about it haha…. but blogging? i’m NOT ok with my tree falling in the forest and nobody hearing lol but that’s probably just me, right? 🙂
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😄 Right. For you Facebook has a meaning of having close friends, the world sees it liking having as many friends as possible without knowing if they exist in real. I don’t have a Facebook. 😋
For me blogging is expressing it without taking care of who notices the thoughts & who does not. People do it for their own freeness & it feels good to portray what you feel. If someone comes up & sees it, it won’t harm for sure & is less annoying. 😊 😄
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it took me a long time to read your comment, my sleeping pills are now kicking in… i must sign off for the evening soon…
good idea to not have a facebook!!!
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Ah! Great to exchange thoughts with you.
Thanks for reading those lengthy comments. You should rest then. 😊
Have a good day.
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it’s 2 am lol tomorrow will be starting soon lol night night, thanks for the fun!
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Life is weird!!
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We(People) are weird too. 😉
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This one madre me think… 🙂
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In real time, it made feel anaesthetic. Thanks for pausing by, Sara!
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You make heartbreak sound so beautiful
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Thanks.
There’s something about pain, it demands to be felt.
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It’s so nice to meet you A,and thanks for reading my blog,I am trully so glad that you red my blogs
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Pleasure Neha.
Thank you.
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Again thanks??
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😛
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I should say thanks to u instead..for being so humble
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It’s okay. 😉
Have a good day!
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you too
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People do experience this in their life… unspoken emotion(s)… :).. loved it..
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Just hope the passage of such experience is not wide.. Good to have your thoughts here. 🙂
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🙂
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