In a Silence..
He thinks of Her.
He thinks of the ‘Promises’, He thinks of ‘Love’.
As He walks down the memory lane, He remembers a word ‘Forever’.
Which he now accepts as ‘Never’. π
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The depth in this piece is amazing.
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Thank you! Heavy heart kept by people for long. But eventually, we need to let go. π Thanks SS.
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Hurts! π that how easily people changes their fovever to never!
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To be honest, I have seen many of those forever changing to never and one side almost forgetting another with time. Just hand on shoulder, for those who went through such bizarre.
Thanks for reading, Aneri. Smile.
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Yaa sometimes they just forgot their promises of forever!! And never happens
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maybe …
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Ya, maybe. Hope you never deal with such scenario. It is tiring. Thanks Carlos.
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I’ve been through that corner a lot, and learned to move on.
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“Love when happens, we forget, soon, we suffered one day.” JoΓ£o Bosco (brazilian musician)
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Great lines . Really a deep thought
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Glad you have liked it, and good to see it made some feel to the readers. Thanks.
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Oh my. So sad. So much said, in so few words …
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Thanks, Marie.
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Nothing remains forever..its better to accept neverπββοΈ
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While living those days, it all appears forever, and in a moment, it all changes. Take care!! Smile.
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I know..it takes only a momentπββοΈ
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Few words say it all ….. piognant but we’ll written
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Thanks Sakshi. Glad you liked it.
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My pleasure π
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I was going to say “The depth in this piece is astounding”, only find its the first comment.
So, I will go with my second thought, “What happened to her? Did she die?”
It’s beautiful!
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Hey, No, she just walked a path, to somewhere he won’t ever find her. Sadly. Thanks for reading.
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oh wow, even sadder!
You’re welcome
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I love this.
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Thanks Tara. Happy to see the smile tweaking your cheeks.
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I love your work, short sweet and succinct. It’s for this reason I am leery about completing my Book projects, I just don’t take to painting panoramic pictures of small ideas.
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Hey Anthony!
Thanks for being here. Really appreciate your feedback. π Would love to go through a chapter of your Book project. Will be an honour.
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All my Drafts and outline can be found on my Page Blogging The Book
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Sure, I will explore it Anthony. π
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This is very intense a..
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Yea, thanks for reading Aditi!
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Just went through pretty much all your posts. If there is anything that can be held as definition of melancholy, itβs your posts.
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Should I be proud of that?? π
Just a feeling being put on web. Happy if someone could relate to it. Thanks for reading, Samir.
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Poignant! There are so many emotions in those four lines. Just a thought though- Why the smiley? Your words are strong enough to convey the feeling even without it. Or there was some other emotion you wanted to add by using the smiley, perhaps?
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Thank you!
The smiley, is just a feeling which I get. Like so much you had and the least you end up with. The dreams of reality of having them forever, the little things that used to happen and they were obvious. All of sudden, they don’t happen now. And you get cramped for it!
Not my story though. π
Good to have the mountain men reading here.
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Hahaha! Mountain men who read! π
And that quite beautifully explains the smiley! Wonderful!
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Thanks! Will explore your lane.. soon. π
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It’s romantic to think “forever” while in love but in reality, we easily forget the goodness of the moments we thought would carry us to forever because the pain of being together drowns it out. Very emotional writing. Thank you for your thoughts.
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That is some thought, that sounds some experience. Thanks for quoting and liking the post, Susi. π
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You are welcome and thank you for your comment. Yes, I’ve had some experience but I’m better for it. π
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This is a sad one… I know letting go is tough. Hope you’re doing ok with everything A π»πΈ
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Thanks, Jennifer! Yes, I am doing fine. Your instincts of reading short notes are putting provoking thought will never get old. π
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Aawwww… that’s so sweet!! Thank you A π Keep writing! π
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Very succinct! This one here proves the power poetry possesses β€οΈ
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Thank you Oishi, happy that you found it good enough. π
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The optimistic thing about it… even the “Never” makes a poet out of souls.. Smile A! π Pleasure reading you again! Take care.
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Thank you, I did smile. Though, you’ve rated me so highly.
It is always wonderful to have few people reading almost each of the posts put here on the blog, so a thought from them is always welcome. Thanks Sharvi. π
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You are welcome A. π
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I wonder how beautiful this story would be
if that forever last for a lifetime. π
but it still is π
I loved it β€
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Ya, but it is all in the gloomy “what if”.
Thanks, Arooba.
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Beautifully penned..however I feel a bit emotional after reading thisπ
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Ah! Don’t get emotional.. smile.. π
Thanks Aditi! Nice to find you reading here.
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Yepp..you’re most welcome A..of course your blog is too good..you will always find readersππ
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Capricorn Aditi, January and Kindness.. Thanks Aditi π
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December*πyou’re most welcome A π
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This takes you to places that you thought would happen but never did. I alway think there is a reason for a broken promise or dream. There is something better to come.
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Really good. A wonderful, positive attitude, and I echo what you quoted. We all should learn better at letting go. Thanks for sharing you thoughts!
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Deep and poignant. Well written. π
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Thank you! π
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Youβre welcome.
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A lot said in few words!! Not everyone has got that talent!!
Just my thought – pain always inspires to write great.
Though clichΓ©d, I think what is meant for us will come to us.
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Thank you, Nalini! Good to have your thoughts on the page. π
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Ahhh. Simply said yet weighed with sadness.
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Thanks, Kavitha! Read a couple of your posts. They were good too. You write on very versatile topics, blog and life building. Great work!!
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Thanks A.
You write beautifully.
From the heart. Powerfully potent. πΊ
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Touched my heart.
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Thank you, Ariana! It is amazing that my writing touched your heart. Thanks for visiting!!
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Sometimes, it is hard, right.
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too painful and relatable, have been in this situation myself
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Oh! It is sad. Some of your posts echo a lot of such feeling! Hope you’re okay and will be good soon.
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aw!! sad yet beautifully written! β€ β€
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Thank you, Flor. Few of my favourite writings too. Glad to see you. π
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My pleasure A β€ β€ ππ Wish you a wonderful day! π
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Wishing the same for you as well, wonderful to know that you figured out my name! π
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πΈπ I read your page and i see it there! Pleasure to meet you!π π
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Superb, thank you again. π
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You have an amazing blog! β€ β€
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You are showering appreciation. Thank you so much, Flor. π
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It’s a honour A ππππππ
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It’s an honour A! ππππΌπΌ
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Thank you so much, Flor! Hope to learn from you. π
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Ouch!
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π Thanks For reading, Pradita!
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Welcome ππ
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Reblogged this on The sense.
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Thank you for sharing!! Hope your readers find it good enough. π
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βNever !β π Well written π
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